Desolate Disco by Fionn Baker (Poem/Lyrics) - Work In Progress
Apocalyptic
The place, our home
So cataclysmic
Still existing but gone, alone
Makes me wanna dance till I die
Take the tears I'm gonna shake 'em dry
In ecstasy, in reverie
Remembering those memories
We can't go to a Desolate Disco
So close, so far away
We can't go to a Desolate Disco
It's okay, okay
We can't go to a Desolate Disco
So close, so far awayWe can't go to a Desolate Disco
It's okay, okay
Good Fionn. Consider matching the syllable count in the stanzas to give it a more structured metre.
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